... Hush me in your arms, Ma ...
Press a soft kiss on my cheeks,
And tap my lil head,
Put me off to sleep;
Tell me, Ma, what should I do? But I want to be 'just' like you! |
Your unmitigated blessings pull out on all my life’s holds,
And, all the beauty I seek in the outside world,
I discover, in your loving folds.
So, hush me in your arms, Ma;
put me off to sleep.
Coz, that's my haven,
that place ... where all my treasures keep.
#LoveYouMa
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PS: This post was In(di)Spired by a prompt chosen by IndiBloggers:
"Post a picture of your mom from her younger days and write a brief personal note to her. It could be anything that you wish to say.. don't worry about things like length, grammar, etc. these mean little to her. Just pour your heart out. #LoveYouMa"
46 Comments
Awesome post Arti, just touched...
ReplyDeleteThat was so sweet.. Loved it...
ReplyDeleteSuch a nice picture of Maa which a daughter would treasure for life ...your lines complemented it so very well... :-)
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem Arti..its so true that a child's heaven lies in the arms of his/her mother..got emotional..
ReplyDeletelovely poem.. I too love to sleep in my mom's arms even now :)
ReplyDeleteReally lovely, Arti. Great poem!
ReplyDeleteAm sure your Mom loves this loving gift from her creative daughter :)
Moms love everything about us!
This is so beautiful, Arti! Look at your mom. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely tribute to your mum.
ReplyDeletethats so well written.. I am sure writing this u would have slipped down the memory lane n times. i am going to save these lines in my dairy.. hope you dont mind..
ReplyDeleteHow sweet and how true! I felt like especially my 1-year-old grandson whispering. He looks always happy in his mom’s arms. Now that my mom is so frail and old, mother-daughter role got reverse but mom is always mom regardless of age.
ReplyDeleteYoko
Lovely poem Arti :) 'Ma', 'Amma', 'Mom'.... These words are so powerful that they beautify everything with the love they spread!
ReplyDeleteSo moving, such beautiful words.
ReplyDelete:) too good...
ReplyDeleteBeautifully heartwarming post! I'm sure your mother must be touched by this gesture.
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteAnd your mom looks beautiful. :)
Ah, sheer beauty. Loved reading it Arti. :)
ReplyDeletebeautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllll... loved it loveddddddddd it ..
ReplyDeleteBikram
Very nice.
ReplyDeleteArti your ma so beautiful , sent my greet to her...
ReplyDeletewoww... I am amazed and so touched by your beautiful words for you Mother. Filled with so much warmth and love.
ReplyDeleteJust Wow..!!!
ReplyDeleteI kind of thought of myself saying these words to my mum.
:)
Such a loving post Arti ! Your mom would have been overwhelmed on reading it..
ReplyDeleteMa is ma.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem and pic is just perfect for the emotions conveyed.
Arti, Truly great post. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteNo words just tears...they roll and hope u will understand.
ReplyDeleteoh, what a very lovely poem for your mom, Arti, your words make my eyes misty over here, so touched by your loving thoughts for your mom
ReplyDeleteVery nice Arti Great words for your ma!
ReplyDeleteTouching! Your mother must be so delighted.
ReplyDeleteImpressive story.Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLovely post! Your mom is so beautiful. She gave you her beauty , honesty,and gift for beautiful words!!
ReplyDeleteI remember you, smiling with tears.
Have a good weekend,Arti.
Sweet and beautiful
ReplyDeleteHow lovely Arti - such a very sweet tribute to your Ma! The photo is so pretty too. Hope you have a super strat to your week!
ReplyDeleteHow lovely and emotional poem! Mum is the point of departure of our life, I think,too.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day!
Beautiful thoughts, straight from the heart, Arti!
ReplyDeleteLove that old photo.
ReplyDeleteNever witnessed an untrammeled and unbridled outburst of emotions put forth in such a concise and meaningful way. Although I believe that a mother's splendor is so beatific that it's ineffable, it came across well here in and in a serene manner. :)
ReplyDeleteTushar Kumar Singh
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What a beautiful photo! I love your tribute and heartwarming word to your mom, Arti. You really do have a way with words. I'm sure she's very proud of you.
ReplyDeleteoh!!!!!!!!!beautiful!
ReplyDeleteaww so sweet...a beautiful pic too
ReplyDeleteVery sweet.. Your mom is very beautiful Arti :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Arti, touching too!
ReplyDeleteput me off to sleep, coz that's my heaven where all my treasures i keep. love this portrayal, this read makes you crave for the mother's lap where in you are relieved from all the pain.
ReplyDeleteThat's beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteRegards, Tanishq Sharma
your words are perfect Arti and the picture is of one of the most poignant moments of a girl's life and is a treasure for a daughter .very emotional .
ReplyDeleteWords are winds and they touches. Written beautifully. Thanks for sharing
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